FFfAW – Week of 3-22-2016 – Time Portal

In response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers – Week of 3-22-2016

This week’s photo prompt is provided by Uday, with the blog, Udayology. Thank you Uday!

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She told me,
you’ll see a circular door
in a blue wall
surrounded by
2 yellow pillars
with a name “Photocentre”.

That’s where,
you’ll have to
make a decision –
to be here
or to go there.

For, you’ll be
transported to another
realm, where
life’s not all that bad.

Near this door,
is where you’ll have to
leave everyone and
everything behind.

That’s when,
I decided that,
there’s nothing
for me here.

That’s when,
I decided
here or there,
its the same everywhere,
better to go in there,
and be in a better place,
than this earth,
which god abandoned,
long time ago.

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18 Comments

  1. It’s very sad that the protagonist feels the world she lives in has been abandoned by God, but at least she has found a place she thinks will be better! Thank you for participating in the FFfAW challenge! We are happy you have joined us!

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  2. It feels like He has abandoned us, huh? Very good story!

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  3. Glad she has found a place she thinks is better.

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  4. I like that she feels at peace with her decision. Great story and a nice touch of sadness.

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  5. “where life’s not all that bad.” Life must really stick for her… This is not that great a promise! Enjoyed!!

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  6. She should have faith and not go over there. She’s not sure what she will see there.

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  7. Take me along! 🙂

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Heyya! Lemme know what you think :)

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